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Rebirth Angel: Stars PG 1 by ~Direblayde:iconDireblayde:


©2007-2010 ~Direblayde
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D: Just a rough sketch. I doubt I'll color it (is 'real' manga ever colored? xD) but I do plan to fiddle with the lineart MAJORLY.

:D Saisei, being emo. This is pretty typical of him - he tends to scream at the sky a lot. He has anger issues.

D8 No text yet. But I'll be using a lot of lyrics from the Switchfoot song Stars. D: I just hope I don't get sued... ;o; If I ever really get serious about publishing etc I'll probably have to pay royalties or something ;o;

D8 BUT MAN THAT WOULD BE SO COOL. IF SWITCHFOOT LIKE, AGREEDDDDDD. AGREEEEEEEED, TO BE IN MY MANGAAAAAAA!!!! -flailfangirlspasmDIES-

-revives self-

*ahem* Anyway... This is just the rough sketch for the first page, so I may add/take away panels and/or flip them to make the layout smoother. But this is the basic idea. :D Feel free to shred it to pieces c8

Rebirth Angel, Saisei, Tentatsu, etc (c) :icondireblayde:

PS: REDLINES ARE LOVE. :heart:

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:iconblissfullyunawarex3:
I like the way it's coming along Iris! I wish I could scream at the sky like that sometimes... But the only times I'm outside is when I'm on a horse or at my brother's soccer games, both completely awkward and utterly wrong times to start screaming at the sky. Ah well. Henny would die if I was on him and started screaming, and my brother and a few of the guys on his team that actually know me would probably trip over themselves in surprise or something... Wouldn't put it past them. XD
:icondireblayde:
xD Living on the edge of a tiny backwater town surrounded by miles and miles of farmland has it's advantages :3

D8 I can't believe I forgot to sketch in his collar and bracelets. -dies-


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:iconblissfullyunawarex3:
Aw, it's just a sketch. Dun worry about it. <:
:icondireblayde:
DDDDD; But they're a major point of the storyline! It's not that they NEED to be there, I know it's a sketch, but...

Just the IDEA that I FORGOT a MAJOR part of his design... ;o;


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:iconunicorn17ferret:
o3o first off, I have no idea which way I should read this: left to right, right to left...? 8D and I would like the last panel to be closer to his face, so we can see some emotion, ne? 8DDD

Interesting though o3o I want to see this linearted and screentoned ;D
:iconblissfullyunawarex3:
Pshaw Iris, you're becoming like me. XD Scary.
:iconspiritxtigress:
AWESOME :D Man, I'm working too hard on my "Mark My Words" Manga >>; I'm coloring it with Adobe :D

-needs to finish page one still |D-


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:iconkaeruneko:
This should be good... I'll read every page! ^_^

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:icondireblayde:
It's right to left. I'm probably going to completely flip that top panel, since the majority of the images on the page seem to focus on his left side :3

:D Thanks! I see now that last panel is too of far away. I wanted the reader to be able to see the emotion of his posture, but is that as important as the facial expression-? I think I'll take your advice on that xD


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